*Note to Reviewee*: Your score in no way is affected by how you reviewed me. I don't want to be biased by that, because that's a dumb reason to give you a bad score. I gave you what I believe you deserve given your lack of maturity in writing and the hideous layout.
Aesthetics
10: Color Scheme: Black and white. It's monochromatic and simple and I like that.
-4: Image: You have got to be kidding me. Let's see, someone is trying to tell me what a hardcore rebel punk rawker they are. Drop it. Really, it's not becoming trying to act like you are so different from other people and you're so seperated from the rest of humanity by your hardcorse disposition, because you are definitely no different than the rest of the kids pretending the same thing. Regardless of what you may think, wearing black eyeliner and wearing spikes does not set you apart from anyone.
2: Organization: Um, well at least I can say the entry boxes are squares, I mean, that's a start. There's more than one link on the same row in your link box. No good, you should probably try putting each one on a different line because it makes it all the easier for a reader. Also, your layout looks really, erm, unfinished? It looks like you started writing the HTML, stopped in the middle, and left it like that. The edges are too sharp, the link box is just floating and doesn't look like it belongs, and for some reason the image and the text are connected and the link box is not. It's a mess. Fix it.
Written Word
0: Grammar: You always fucking use capitols for a whole sentence. You also do that absolutely asinine thing where you put actions in little asteriks. You don't need to inform me or anyone else that you are glaring or looking back and forth. It makes you look like an idiot, which you say you are not. It's hard to believe with such writing. Sometimes, you don't even use complete sentences. I do not know how I dealt with this. You're making the OCD go overboard, sweetie. In general, you have OK grammar. You capitalize and punctuate, and that's more than I can expect of the general population. Correction: You had 7 points for grammar at one point, but now you have zero. This is because, if you had good grammar, you could have a better synonym for "stupid" than "fucking gay." Gee, and now you're using "sissy ass" and "faggish." Gee, I only with I was as smart as you.
4: My Opinion: In your latest entry, you complain about your old entries and how they remind you of the past. In case you didn't know, that's what a diary is for. It's for realizing your mistakes and remembering a portrait of yourself at a point in time. I don't know why you're keeping a diary if you don't want to remember anything. Started reading past entries here. Shit. Please kill yourself. Do not go around calling other people emo, and then have this, even if it is a joke. You are an imbecile. Ahhhh, the angst of a non-conformist. Shut the fuck up. You probably shop at the mall (Hot Topic, anyone?), buy everything retail, and buy name brand food at retail chains. Quit your bitching. Do not ever complain about the immaturity of other people before you look at yourself. You just said a couple entries before this that it's okay if you label people, but when she labels you, you have a fit. You can't hold a double standard unless your purpose in life is to be a hypocritical bitch, then by all means, go ahead and keep it up. Kill yourself now. I hate it how you act like you are so much more enlightened and so much smarter than everyone else because everything you've written has proven you are definitely not. HAHAHAHAHAHA! YOU ARE SORE FROM THE MOSH AT SLIPKNOT! You are a fucking consumer whore. Slipknot is one of the most commercialized crappy bands on the face of this earth whose fans think it's so alternative. Ha, it's not. The only reason I have given you points is because you like Ed Gein and he is quite wonderful. If you like serial killers, check out Albert Fish, Mary Bell, and Ridgway (Green River Killer). I could go on forever, but I love those three. Try Crime Library and then go to serial killers. It has just about every one known to man. (See, I can be nice.) OH! I'm being blinded by the hardcore! Now I can tell you shop at Hot Topic or something similar, so don't complain about consumer whores and conformists. You have no right.
All together, you don't really write about anything intelligent. I mean, you bitch about things and act like a whiney little brat, but that's about it. Get some substantial content in there. Write about what you're thinking (besides how cool and non-conformist you are).
-2: Writing Style: It's just so, erm, childish? I don't think that's the right word. This diary is probably stretched to the farthest lengths of unrealized hypocrisy I've seen in a while. Just stop trying to be so different from everyone. It doesn't make you cool, it doesn't make you special, and it certainly doesn't give you any more stupid scene points than that girl you hate in her Abercrombie sitting across the classroom from you because she's pretty and skinny.
Other
5: Contact: Email and notes. I'm not big on contacts, as long as I can reach you. Full credit and a gold star for you.
-1: Username: Trying to set yourself apart from society by calling yourself a weirdling is just making you more and more like everyone else. I don't like it. It is, however, your choice, and you get a point.
-5: Title: Well, does "it sucks" cover it? Tip: Titles should have something to do with the layout presented. Also, "Suck dead bunnies" is, in fact, a complete sentence, and only the word "suck" should be capitalized.
5: Link: It's there.
Comments: There's really not much to say. I think your writing is asinine and your layout is possibly one of the worst I've ever seen. I LOVE it how you tell me you never knew about Insanity before you made your review site, when yours was created 2 days before you got reviewed at Insanity. I know for a fact you had requested at Insanity before you created your site, because I check there sometimes just to read, and you've been on the pending list longer than I have. You lose.
Reviewed by: Charlotte
Total: 14 / 100 (Congratulations, I hope you enjoy listening to me telling you what a jackass you are. You enjoy it, so, gee, you should be absolutely giddy.)
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