Aesthetics

9: Color Scheme: Ew, I hate blue with a burning passion. However it matches well and looks good with the overall theme of your diary.

2: Image: Well, I'm going to put it as simply as I can. If I could burn a template, this one would be a pile of ashes with some glass shards mixed in. Out of a long relationship blah blah blah, don't stick that in your layout. I could understand 10 in depth entries or something, but not a template theme. It's badly Photoshopped (I'm assuming you used Adobe Photoshop) and it's just annoying.

8: Organization: Sometimes, when I click on a shorter entry, things in the layout shift around, and it's weird. Other than that really annoying little detail, there's nothing wrong with it. Oh wait, and also, it's way too spread out. The entry box is about a mile from the text box on my screen.

Written Word

10: Grammar: Good. Ah, I'm proud.

20: My Opinion: Okay, because of the fact that your entries are excruciatingly long, I started at ten entries rather than twenty, because in your diary, twenty is like fifty, and I don't have the attention span for that right now.

Well, I think your writing is a lot better that I expected, because just from looking around and such, you seem like an idiot, but you really aren't (or at least that's what I draw from this entry.

Gross, we have the same sick indulgence. We both like being hit on, even if it is by scary people. It makes us all feel attractive, secretly, I think. Everyone probably has this disposition and won't admit it. But you are right, if it gets excessive, it's annoying and you wish all the damn pedophiles lived in a commune in Antarctica. (PS: Nickelback is the worst band ever.)

Ugh, you listen to bad music.

I don't really have much else to say. I mean, you're a good writer when you're not posting bad lyrics.

7: Writing Style: You seriously need to stop using so many damn blockquotes. You use them constantly and it's so irritating. I hate blockquotes. It's also really irritating how you always post bad lyrics. Just... stop. Other than that, though, I like your writing.

Other

5: Contact: I can reach you.

2: Username: I don't really like it, plain and simple, and your explanation for it is something I also hate. Oh, I've done things wrong in life. Yeah, so has everyone else.

4: Title: It matches your overall theme, so I guess that's acceptable. I don't really like it. The other complaints I have is that the word "take" should be capitolized and there should be a period after "them".

2: Link: Holy shit. Ok, seperate your pending and past into different areas or something because this is an absolute mess. Or, at least alphabetize your links, because having 40 million links is a mess and quite annoying for us reviewers. However, it's there after I searched.

Other Comments: Eh, you're a pretty good writer, and that's all I have to say. Oh, and quit it with the lyrics. (Ha. Gee, you are such a bad ass. I'm taking off three points for you thinking you're cool.

Reviewed by: Charlotte

Final Score: 66 / 100

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