Aesthetics
4: Color Scheme: It doesn't even match. The colors clash. I do like the green, though, so you can have some points for that.

2: Image: So you don't have an image. I guess I'll just look at the overall appearence. I'm not sure if it's just the IE browser or something but it's all lopsided or something. The text box is lower than the rest by 30px or something. No good. It's so boxy, it reminds me of a default, but I guess it's not because your design link goes back to you.

7: Organization: Like I said before, the text box is about 30px lower. Try shrinking it by maybe 20px and then moving it up another 30 or so, then see it if matches up better. Other than that, the rest is super organized and easily looked through. The only thing is, it's ugly. I really don't know what other tips I can give you beside the aforementioned or the suggestion to just change it.

Written Word

10: Grammar: Oh, sigh. Bien, bien. It's better than most of the general population. Your diary is so much easier on the eyes because you can spell properly, you use paragraphs, you capitalize, and you punctuate correctly. I'm a sucker for grammar and spelling (minus the occasional typo). That is what I'd expect out of you, though, and no less, since you are 22.

30: My Opinion: Well, your entries are excruciatingly long and I have a short attention span, so I started here. Finally, someone smart. I totally agree with you. Thank you so much for having some sense. I'm not saying cutters have absolutely no emotional pain (the older ones at least), but making yourself physically sick for it is ridiculous.

Awww! Congratulations! I wish you the best. Haha you are so cute! (I can still call you cute even though I'm 5 years younger, because you are cute.) Picturing yourself in every pretty dress and secretly looking at your bridal magazines. It's adorable. The wedding you have in your mind sounds absolutely beautiful.

And the wedding was more beautiful than the one you were thinking of in July. Oh, and a European honeymoon, could it be anymore perfect?

I really like you, I decided. Surprisingly, the excruciatingly long thing doesn't bother me. <3 for you.

8: Writing Style: Eh, I didn't know where else to put this, but holy crap, I just went back ten entries and I'm about 8 months into the past. I bet your readers thought you died. Other than that, though, you don't completely bore me, which is amazing. I acctually find myself liking you, and I think it's because you acctually write about something, or it could be because I'm used to reviewing 13 or 14 year old girls.

Other
5: Contact: I can reach you.

3: Username: Your cat's name. That has nothing to do with you. I'm not a big fan of name names, but it's ok.

4: Title: "The Diary of a New York Lady" How original, you are a lady and you live in New York. Not bad, definitely not good. But, it's your choice, not mine.

5: Link: Lucky you, gold star.

Favorite Quote: I know! How To Deal. Rick just saw that and said “aw shit.” Well that’s what he gets for making me look at Matt Damon’s big head for two hours.
Oh, and in the same entry, they're killing Rory Cochrane? You cannot kill Rory Cochrane. He was Lucas in Empire Records and therefore, is amazing.

Comments: I like you. The only things that really brough the score down was the template.

Reviewed by: Charlotte

Final Score: 88 / 100 Hall of Fame!


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