First Impression: Simplistic and quite pretty. Oh wait, you've decided to kill yourself. Well that's special. This should be an interesting read.

Aesthetics

9: Color Scheme: Same general color palette as my personal diary, and therefore, I have no complaints for you, dear. It's very soft and pretty, but a bit dull because of said softness.

10: Image: Those are branches, no? Normally, I don't go for nature oriented layouts, but this picture is very pretty. I love how it fades into the background. I have no issues with this because it is just about perfect.

10: Organization: I think you are one of the rare people that has your template down to pure perfection. It's polished and simply gorgeous and I have absolutely no complaints.

Written Word

10: Grammar: No complaints.

30: My Opinion: Started here. Oh god, sweetie, you are not lost. You are 18. You shouldn't be married or have kids or any of those things. You should be doing exactly what you're doing, and honestly, I think you are much wiser than those that have started their lives as 30 year olds at 18.

I KNEW IT! I knew you read Dostoevsky! Just from the way you're writing, all psuedo-intellectual-like, it reminded me of my friends Karl and all of those other Dostoevsky reading psuedo-intellectuals.

This entry is beautiful. I cannot get over how beautiful your words are.

Again, you have the capability to write so beautifully and I'm terribly jealous. To most, I can imagine, who lack the intelligence to grasp what you are writing about, you may seem boring and seem like you are trying to hard, but to me, your writing is amazing. It is not perfectly polished, but it is none the less wonderful.

Your writing, for lack of a better word, is melodic. You talk about killing yourself, but I say the world cannot afford to lose such beauty to chemical imbalance.

10: Writing Style: Like I said before, first thing that popped into my head was that this girl reads Dostoevsky. I don't know why I have a preoccupation with that, but I do. You have a beautiful writing style for a novelist or something of the sort, but for a diarist, it seems so impersonal. I think I can safely say, you seem to reduce yourself and your mind to beautiful language, but not much actual feeling. However, the sheer beauty of your writing astounds me.

Other

5: Contact: Found it.

2: Username: Uh, right, I hate your username. No cure for what, may I ask? Oh... impossible dreams. That makes me woosy. You're just trying to be deep and just sounding like a twit.

5: Title: I <3 it very much. Very much indeed.

5: Link: Found it.

Other Comments:

Favorite Entries: (033) Wave and (045) Tribute: You're the first, I believe, to get a favorite entry, much less two favorites.

Favorite quote: Is there anything behind the mirror? It’s difficult to picture a three-dimensional person on a two-dimensional surface. The left-out pieces keep cutting the subconscious, and beauty surgery is a poor painkiller. They develop an addiction easily but don’t fix the actual problem: A man can’t be made into a god.

Reviewed by: Charlotte

Final Score: 96 / 100 Hall of Fame, pretty lady.

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