Okay, I accidently closed the window with the review in it so um, yeah. This may not be as detailed as it originally was.

First Impression: 30 MPH on a rural road? Are you joking?

Aesthetics

5: Color Scheme: I really hate this color scheme. Dusty pink is so far from pretty, it's funny. It reminds me of buying a house, there's one room you walk into with the dusty pink paint and the rose border that you vow to paint over as soon as humanly possible. That's what your layout is.

5: Image: I really don't like the image or the words in the least bit. It's just not pretty or eye catching or anything. I'm one that goes for bolder images, like pinups and such. This doesn't do anything at all for me. You can have points though, since you took the picture.

10: Organization: It's very well organized, overly organized, even. I really have no complaints.

Written Word

8: Grammar: Your paragraphs are really short sometimes, like one or two sentences, and it's irritating. You spell things wrong a lot and you forget commas and don't capitalize things like "Christian."

21: My Opinion: Started here. I hate long entries so much. I really hope they're not all this long because I may just get bored and go make some taquitos or something. I can totally relate to this entry. The whole thing with the papers.

Uh, who? I hate entries like this with a burning passion. When the writer refers to a he or a she that no one but the writer knows about. Elaborate a little. In the least, give me something that hints at who "he" is and why it makes you sick to see him.

Are you joking? He dropped you for Jesus? That's what I'm understanding here. Oh, and then he starts preaching? Gee, if I were you, he'd be thrown out a top floor window at that point. You should kill every religious that try to "save you." Anyone like that trying to impress their church on you does not deserve recognition. You obviously aren't part of their faith for a reason (I'm speaking for myself here, I guess). People don't need friends like that. The Jesus freaks can stay with the Jesus freaks. I agree so much with this entry and the way you put it was wonderful. Good job.

Haha, this seems like your trying to be all artsy about the freckle on your toe. Are you kidding me? You sound like a loon. The freckle on your toe won't disappear unless you either lose your toe or I come cut it off because you're annoying me.

Hint: Fight Club (Chuck Palahniuk) was quite correct about insomnia.

I hate people like this. They're greedy and unthankful. Try talking to your dad. I don't know if you have or not, but you need to, regardless of what you think his reaction will be.

You live in Boston? For college, I assume. I'm planning on going there for college if I can get the crazy conservatives that are my grandparents to let me.

You write well, but you're boring. You have some real things to write about, and do it well, but I'm one that likes being amused, and you definitely don't amuse me.

8: Writing Style: You are quite a good writer, I must admit that I am impressed. You're a good writer, but not really an entertaining writer, and that's pretty much my only complaint. You are eloquent and such, but then you're not fun to read about. I find myself sitting here and thinking how much I don't care.

Other

5: Contact: Yep.

1: Username: moretoknow? Could you be more boring or cliche? Seriously, originality in this here diary place is good, and moretoknow is horribly cliche. I hate it.

2: Title: Uh, okay? What does that have to do with anything? It doesn't even go with the words on your image or anything. I like the way it looks, but the words suck and make no sense. Silly girl.

5: Link: Wow you have a lot of reviews. No complaints from me, however, since they're alphabetized.

Favorite Quote: See, in our society it's OK to tell someone about god. It's ok to tell them about your beliefs and it's ok to think about doing good in the world by spreading it. But let an atheist tell a christian that he/she is wrong and you've got a serious crisis on your hands. Because it's a terrible double standard. Because you're allowed to look down on me, simply because I'm not christian but the world considers me to be "ignorant" if I don't give respect people with faith. Why should I, you don't respect me.

You think I'm stupid and rejecting the true ways of life.

Funny part? I think you're doing the exact same thing, only I'm not allowed to say it out loud for fear of stigma.

Other Comments: Nothing, really.

Reviewed by: Charlotte

Final Score: 70 / 100

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