First Impression: I LOVE your layout. Ah, I wish I'd had this first!
Aesthetics
7: Color Scheme: This is my only issue. You have a bunch of dusty pinky-browns, and then a more orange entry box. Other than that little shading difference, it's gorgeous. I'm taking off another point because I just noticed that your active links are black, and that's totally off from your color scheme.
10: Image: I really can't say anymore than I love it to death.
7: Organization: My biggest issue, which I'm taking off points for, is the damn scroll bar. I'm seeing a default Windows scrollbar. I also know, from going to the designer, that this wasn't programmed in another browser, considering the screenshot I saw. Change the scrollbar colors, because the way it looks now is absolutely hideous. Other than that, it's simple and wonderful.
Written Word
8: Grammar: This is sort of grammar, and sort of not. It's so distracting to read your entries when they're right aligned. Oh my lord, you, honey, make me happy. You spelled conceited right! No one on diaryland can spell that right and this makes me love you unconditionally (well, not quite, but close).
22: My Opinion: Started here. Just reading that, you seem so sappy, but at the same time, you remind me of my chubby British goddess (Bridget Jones). That's a good thing. I love Bridget Jones.
You Brits have much better slang than Americans. Not to mention, legally smoking and playing the lottery is so different from here. (Sorry, culture shock. No wonder you all seem to think Americans are idiots.)
I cannot possibly relate more. I know that feeling, it's the worst. Boredom is overwhelming.
Ha, I love you. This reminds me of me, underwear are fun. (Wow, that was an asinine comment.)
This entry is one I really liked. It sort of gave me an insight into your daily life, but wasn't so overwhelmingly day-loggish that I wanted to stop reading. Not many people can do that.
Ha! A DDR addict. Seriously, you are amazingly wonderful. I found this entry amusing (however cruel that may be), and was acctually laughing inside my my head.
You are so right. I hate that feeling so much. I gave blood once, and then passed out 10 minutes later while talking with some friends. So, no matter how weird you felt, at least you didn't stop speaking in mid-sentence, have your eyes roll back in your head, and fall on a bench.
And in the same entry, I'm thinking about how terribly jealous I am of your gorgeous Killers-esque frontman.
Still jealous of your frontman, I will conclude with the statement that I like you. Sometimes, I found myself skimming things because they bored me and others I wanted more.
9: Writing Style: I really despise how all your entry titles have the word "cookie" in them. You amuse me, sometimes, but sometimes, I think it's only your vocabulary. You bounce back and forth frequently from boring to interesting.
Other
5: Contact: I can reach you.
1: Username: I hate it, I really really hate it.
3: Title: It matches your username, but it doesn't match your layout. It's okay, I guess.
5: Link: Whoo hoo, it's there.
Other Comments: I looked at your profile and you literally made me a very happy girl. The Killers, Louise Rennison, The Green Mile, Mean Girls, Fight Club, Muse... I don't need to go on, you are wonderful, love.
Reviewed by: Charlotte
Final Score 77 / 100 So close to the Hall of Fame. Closer than most, anyway.
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