First Impression: Ooooh, pretty! <3's for exploding dog

Aesthetics

9: Color Scheme: I <3 this very much. I don't think there's anything else to say. Wait, one complaint. The orange on your bold and italic text is super annoying.

10: Image: See above.

6: Organization: Are you kidding? The template changes when I click the older entries link. Fix that, please. It's irritating. That will take a bunch of points off, but other than that, you're good.

Written Word

5: Grammar: What is up with your paragraphs? Lack of paragraphs may be a better way to phrase that, acctually. Each one consists of about one sentence. A paragraph should consist of 3-5 sentences (3rd - 8th grade) or 5-7 sentences (9th grade - forever). Embrace it. Haha "I really shouldn't have swore." Okay, let's revert back to about the age of 8. What is wrong with the tense of the verb in that sentence? THAT'S RIGHT, swore should be sworn.

All of you damned colors on bold and italic text make me want to shoot you. Grammar is a simple skill, okay? Learn to use it properly!

14: My Opinion: Started here. Wow, daylogging. This should be FUN. Not to mention, it's not even interesting daylogging.

Like, oh my gosh! I shold not have sworn! I should go say the rosary a couple times! Gee, get over it. Seriously, it's not like your fabricated Jesus is going to roll over in his grave and damn you to hell because you said crap.

You're dumb. It's Valentine's Day not un-Valentines. That's like saying your un-birthday is on your birthday. You are a disgrace to the Mad Hatter.

Hmmm, it's called a medical miracle. If there was a kind and loving God, you wouldn't have almost died and people would live until they are old and pass away instead of dying of cancer and HIV. How can people believe?

Youth Group, God, "I prayed today," blah blah blah. That's exactly what I get from your diary. I told you I don't like Catholics or Christians in the reviewer profile, so why did you apply? You did it to spite me didn't you?

I never said I'm not biased, alright?

5: Writing Style: Update much? 3 times a day regularly is a lot of updating. You must have no life. Daylogging is not fun to read. You're not clever and you're not amusing. The only positive thing I can say is that your writing is semi-legible.

Other

5: Contact: Plenty, for sure.

0: Username: Eh, I stated I hate religious people. I'm not going to rant, you can go see my diary if you want a rant.

4: Title: Makes sense but I don't really like it.

5: Link: Ha uh, it's there. You do realize you have yourself linked under a Baptist listing but you're not even Baptist... I really hope you're not one of those people that knows less about their religion than I do. I know a lot, trust me.

Other Comments: You are so Christian. Blech. I don't look down on you, per se, I look down on the Church itself. Everything I've been taught has been to love the Church and everything that goes with it (my schooling), however, my schooling is what turned me against it. It's just knowing what the Church has done and the hypocrisy that makes me hate it so much.

Reviewed by: Charlotte

Final Score: 64 / 100

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