Note to reviewee: Goodnight is one word.
Aesthetics
8: Color Scheme: Simple and monochromatic. Not a problem. White writing on gray, though, is a bit difficult to read.
3: Image: Holy shit. It's assaulting me. Shrink it, seriously, e image, but it's huge. The kurt-halsey watermark at the bottom sucks too. I really don't like it in a template either.
1: Organization: Eh, it's not good. Not good at all. You really need to fix the scrollbars. I see default Windows scrollbars. It's not 1996, so you have the ability to, and should, fix it. You also have a HUGE image and a tiny text box. They need to be proportional. I can tell you don't really know what you're doing when it comes to html.
Oh my god. Seriously, can I slap you? Please? You have no link to your older entries on this diary. What the hell?! FIX IT! I am not a patient person. Shit.
Written Word
5: Grammar: You don't capitolize days of the week. You have retarded paragraphs. You have OK spelling and punctuation.
XX: My Opinion: Do you know how to read? Do you know how to follow rules? In case you didn't, here's a hint: I said have 20 or more entries (not extras). You have maybe 12 normal entries and 3 others (reviews, new diary, and probably something else. I refuse to finish this review until you get a couple more entries.
3: Writing Style: I only read this diary, not your old one. I think you are dry and trite. You don't write very much, and I guess that's good because you don't write about very much. Your longest entries maybe contain a couple 3 sentence paragraphs.
Other
5: Contact: I can reach you.
2: Username: Let's feign a bit more depression shall we? I don't know, the name makes me itch.
2: Title: What's with the underscores?
5: Link: It's there. Bravo, buddy.
Other Comments: When you have added about 10 more entries, let me know and I will finish the content review. Other than that, I don't have much to say now. Your final score in the new review will, however, have 10 points deducted for not reading / not following the rules
Reviewed by: Chatlotte
Final Score: 34 + XX / 100