Aesthetics

7: Color Scheme: Matches, very well. A bit run-of-the-mill for me. I like bolder colors, ones that stand out more. I also really hate blue. It's not bad by any means, but I just don't like it. Last thing, the solid black boxes at the top and the bottom just don't match very well, they stand out too much against the blue. In my opinion, making them the same colors as the entry box would look a lot better.

7: Image: No image, so I'll just talk about overall appearence. It's very clean. That's about all I can say for its overall visual appeal. It works, though. I really don't like how the name of the entry is seperate from the entry, and I don't like the links at the bottom.

6: Organization: Extremely organized. Your extras page, however, is a bit messy. Try putting more space in between the links and then making the "General Cast" on a seperate page, because it just seems cluttered the way it is now, especially the contacts all the way at the bottom. Fucccck... as I'm reading, I'm finding it really difficult to click on your forward and back links with the laptop mouse. 2 more points off, it's frustrating me.

Written Word

0: Grammar: You make up words. I hate it when people make up words (fakies?). I don't know, your grammar is alright, but it needs improvement. Oh, and you use gay as a synonym for stupid. Good job, there goes your grammar points.

14: My Opinion: So before I go backwards, I read your cast, and your cat is exactly like me. He takes showers with me. I love him to death. Moving on, Started here.

HAHAHA! I hope he left it on your lawn. That would make me so happy, I love that old man. I like old men in general, they're funny. It's not the landlord's job to clean up roadkill (even if it is a poor kitten, which I am apathetic towards), it's the city's job. Little kids have to get used to roadkill, it happens, they just have to learn not to poke it with sticks.

I love Violet and Claire/ I love FLB. She's an amazing writer. Read Weetzie Bat, it's good too.

Oh, how romantic. Sarcasm is my friend. Thank you for drawing a picture of where you had sex. You must have no life. Not to mention, how is giving him a handjob relaxing to you?

The next entry you say is a "rant". That's not a rant. A rant is defined as To speak or write in a angry or violent manner; rave. That was not a rant, it was a block of stupid. Well, not really, because I feel the same way, but you're beginning to annoy me.

Aw, sweetie, you are way too young to be thinking about marriage and being with
him for another four years. You are only a sophomore and have so much more to experience before that.

You are such a brat. You're gonna have to deal with what your mom says about him. There was NO reason for this to turn into such a huge fight (from my perspective). My father is so much worse about my boyfriend than your mom, and I just don't talk to him about it. Try something alone those lines, or staying cool and calm. It's so much easier than acting like a complete brat. Your mother is entitled to her own opinion.

You're so boring, I don't get it. You have things to write about, but you put it in a way that makes me want to stop reading, though I can't, because I'm reviewing you, and that would be mean. Sometimes I like you, but most of the time you're just annoying.

4: Writing Style: I definitely should not have to go back to September to get to 20 entries. You need to update like a normal person. Twice a month really doesn't cut it. You seem younger than your age. You're too young to be having sex and sharing it with everyone. I just... don't like you. You're boring, to put it as blunt as possible and get this over with.

Other

5: Contact: I can reach you.

2: Username: No explaination. It really doesn't tickle my fancy.

1: Title: What the hell does "He calls me beautiful in Japanese" have to do with anything? I hate it.

4: Link: It's there, gold star. My only issue is that with locked diaries, no one will see it.

Comments: I don't understand why you have extras or cast, especially pictures, if you're afraid of people finding your diary. I'm guessing the extras are to please reviewers, since they're the only ones that apparently read your diary.

Other Comments: I grade difficultly. I don't like you, and you still fared well in comparison to some people.

Reviewed by: Charlotte

Final Score: 50 / 100


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