Aesthetics

10: Color Scheme: I like it. I like it a lot. It just looks so... good. I think a white background would look better though.

4: Image: The image is cute and quite humorous, but not on a layout. I think it's not appropriate for a layout because it looks a bit messy.

10: Organization: Aw, I love you so much now. I hope I don't hate your diary. It's organized gorgeously and your links are all in order and each on their own line. I think I'm going to cry. You are the first person I've reviewed with worthwhile organization. I'm clapping for you in my head. (PS: In this section alone you've exceeded scores I've given on here before. <3.)

Written Word

3: Grammar: You are no good at capitalizing titles. First entry I read and I stumble upon The Nutracker not capitalized or italizied. It makes me want to poke my eyes out. Then, after this, you randomly capitalize. Will the madness ever stop?! Eh, your grammar sucks. You always say "woo." Woo is not a word. I guess you at least punctuate. Two points for you.

15: My Opinion: Started here. Oh, and in the next entry you "fucking hate your life." Awesome, so do the rest of us, it's not something new that we need to hear about. Derrr! If you don't think they're reading, why are you apologizing? A diary is ok for apology to yourself, but to apologize to people that probably aren't even readint it? You are none too bright here. You're just kind of boring and you talk about dumb things like coffee, details of your homework, and G-Unit? Ughhh. Erm, are you only allowed to have emotions once a week? You write dry daylogs. It's not fun to read, I can tell you that. Your life is boys, boys, boys (or should I say boy?) and school, school, school. Spice it up. Go somewhere. Duhhhh, January 23 can't be National Pie Day! March 14 is Pi Day (Get it? 3 / 14... 3.14... Right, I'm done.).

Well, I guess that's pretty much it. You write dry day-logs. I think you actually do have the potential to be a good writer. Hell, at least you're not a pathetic wannabe non-conformist like my last review.

5: Writing Style: Dry. It's dry. That's it. You do, however, have the potential (I believe) to be a good diary writer. You write like me 2 years ago (not that I'm any good now). I think you just need time to develop.

Other
5: Contact: I can reach you, so it's A-OK.

1: Username: Um, I'm sure you like it. I honestly hate it a lot. It reminds me of patriotism. Ew.

0: Title: It doesn't match and it's stupid. Ehhhh...

2: Link: The only reason I found the review links was because I decided, on a whim, to read your bio. It would be a lot better for reviewers if you'd place a seperate link in your main link box for reviews. I don't like searching. You do, however, get a point because it's there.

Comments: You like some good bands (Dashboard, Bright Eyes, and Straylight Run). You are an emo kid and so am I and we are cool, because I said. I really don't like how you said you don't drink or smoke so you are straight-edge. Straight-edge is so much more that just not drinking, smoking, and fucking. It has a lot more meaning and it's a lifestyle. That was a dumb thing to say.

Other Comments:

Reviewed by: Charlotte

Final Score: 52 / 100 I sort of like you and I don't know why. Too bad about the mediocre score


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