4: Color Scheme: Uhhh, ew. Sorry, I just threw up a little. I really hate that bright red, not to mention there's not red in the picture except the inaptly colored text. Orange would be better.
4: Image: I agree with the concept, and therefore you get some points. The thing is, I'm so sick of seeing that quote and I bet everyone else is too. The image is grainy and the making of it is bad quality. It just doesn't toot my horn.
8: Organization: Organized really well, in fact. My only complaint is the loves, hates, girl, friends sections. I can't stand those. They belong seperate from the main page. They just create clutter. (I do agree with your hates and anti-Bush. I wish we still burned people at the stake.)
Written Word
6: Grammar: Have you ever written a complete paragraph? These spaced out little two sentence blurbs are annoying. Also, you put words in little asteriks to identify an action or eccentuate a word. Don't be stupid. You are 20 years old and should not be using the idiotic symbols of a 13 year old. Seriously, don't do that ever again. Other than those two things, you punctuate, capitolize, and have OK spelling. No more complaints from me.
19: My Opinion: Started here. Aw and I'm looking through the pictures and one has your cute little sticker about Jesus and peace. Jesus is dead, he doesn't maintain peace. Why do you think God (if it exists) cares about us? Do you have a reason to believe that? I'm sorry, I'm not here to argue religion with here. It's not the fact that God exists that I debate, it's the legitimacy of the Bible and the atrocities of the Church I disagree with (Look at what years of Catholic school has done to me. I don't think I could possibly know more about the Bible.) Moving on...
"Okay, not really, because my friends and I are still underage, but you just wait until next year." Ha, you're silly. Who cares about the legality anymore?
Ha. You listen to Korn. That's depressing.
FINALLY! Someone else agrees with me. Yes, it was horrible. Yes, people died. Thousands die in Rwanda every week and I don't see anyone sending the gang raped women and their dead children any money. Dark forces created the Tsunami? Yeah, you fucking idiots, the aliens live at the center of the Earth and create giant earthquakes. They're distantly related to the little fairies that run the traffic lights. People are not very smart.
You are so right. I can't stand Republicans, and my father is one as well. Anyone with the ability to investigate the facts and know the difference between right and wrong should be allowed to have their own political convictions. Parents think they can shelter you forever. He'll still be doing it when you're 30.
I'm bored. You're boring me. I don't really have any reason to hate you (besides Jesus), but I don't really have any reason to like you either. You're ho hum but I guess that's okay with me now. It's weird.
4: Writing Style: You're trite and boring. That's it. Do you have emotions? From reading this diary, I can just about conclude that you do not. I'm not telling you to be sappy and enjoy wallowing in self pity, but please, for the love of your God, have some emotions. Your entries are short and boring, but for some reason, I don't hate you. I must be in a good mood.
Other
5: Contact: I can reach you, that's all that counts.
4: Username: I searched to find the meaning because it was confusing me. Yes, the x-files are quite amazing and Oasis, well, um, yeah. It's an okay name...
5: Title: Haha you bet it does, but we all know it will never happen.
2: Link: I had to go searching. I hate searching. It's not fun for me. I have the attention span of a ADHD affected child with Torrets.
Comments: You did pretty well, considering how much I usually hate people. I just score hard. You're okay, you're nothing special (Well, your diary isn't at least.) Blah.
Reviewed by: Charlotte
Final Score: 60 / 100