First Impression: No capitolization, brown, and a bad quote or something. This doesn't make me happy...
Aesthetics
4: Color Scheme: It matches... that's the only thing that saved you in this part of the scoring. I really hate the coloring, however it goes well together with the image and is well coordinated. The white on that color brown is extremely distracting to me. There's isn't enough contrast between the two.
3: Image: I really hate it, plain and simple. It's boring and makes me sleepy. The brush work on it is absolutely horrible. Whoever used photoshop (the greatest program ever) to fuck up an image like that should be shot. Maybe not to that extreme, but I can't believe how bad the brushing it. Bad brushing, combined with a boring image and a idiotic quote makes for a bad image to base a layout on. However, it is not, by far, the worst image I have ever seen. Lucky you.
7: SURPRISE! The general way the layout is set up is very well organized, and I would normally praie the organization. The biggest issue I have is the links. (I hate the outline around them.) <--- That's not the complaint. The complaint is the fact that you have a well organized layout and have the ability to put each link on its own line and you don't. Two links on one line is distracting to me, and consider that your major loss of points in this section. I think the reason you didn't do that is because you have so many links. I suggest you move your friends, projects, links, and extras all to entry on your diary. It would be a lot better looking having all of those links placed on a seperate page with one link titled "extras" or something to that effect. I hate extras.
Written Word
3: Grammar: Your grammar makes me want to shoort myself in the fucking head. LEARN TO CAPITOLIZE! (Please?) I can already forsee you giving the excuse that it's your diary and you don't feel the need for grammar, etc. Too damn bad, this is really annoying. Everything else is semi-okay, though, so I'll give you some points. (I'm not generous.) There are also soooo many fragmented sentences. It's really irritating.
19: My Opinion: here. I did some digging to find out what your age was, because after reading the first two extries, I assumed you were older. You sound much older than your age, but that's not a good thing in this case. Just the things you're writing about don't seem age appropriate (I sound like my fucking grandmother). Contradictory to that, you look a lot younger than your age (Looks 12 vs. is 17 vs. sexual like 25).
I've gone through about 5 entries and have heard absolutely nothing about you, more about him. Your diary so far isn't allowing anyone to get to know you as a person, but you sexaully. Sex and loving him can't be your whole life, and if they are, then that's very sad.
Don't do that to yourself. Do not major in psychology. That would be one of the stupider things you could do. A huge percentage of high school students go into psychology as a major, and can't make it in the real world because of such an overflow of psychologists. Define what you really want to do psychologically, like family relations or youth related psychology, you'll do better in life with a more specified major. I wanted to be a psychologist, but when I found there were so many that couldn't make it, I turned to criminology.
This entry gave me the first real insight into your life beyond sex and "love." This entry seriously almost made me cry because it reminds me so much of myself. Not to the same extremes, but in some ways. When you leave for college, your mom will be so lost (as will mine).
... and that is the last insight I will have. Apparently, you are practically incapable of writing about anyone but Chris. You honestly need to expand your horizons, because, even though you think you won't, you will likely break up, and then where will you be? Just from reading this it seems like you have no friends except him, and devastation will have it's onset when you two fight or have issues. I understand what this feels like (oh, like you wouldn't believe), but you need to keep your life in perspective.
The score is so low because of the following:
It's not like you can't be interesting, but the monotony of your diary is overwhelming.
MONOTONY!
And, last but not least, the fucking monotony.
7: Writing Style: You have no variety. You could be a good writer if you capitolized and varied your subject. I don't think I saw one capitolized letter throughout your whole diary and that totally threw me off of your writing. You really do have writing potential, though, because you have a nice way with words.
Other
2: Contact: Lots of them. Shit, scratch that. I had to email you to get ahold of you, and that was SUPER inconvenient.
1: Uh, it's stupid. I hate usernames with people's names in them.
1: Title: Uh, how original (How repetitive). I hate it, and the pluses are dumb.
4: Link: Holy shit, how many reviews do you need?! I found it, but it took some skimming.
Other Comments: You need to stop the monotony and focus, too, on other aspects of your life. Your score is low, but that doesn't mean I really hate you, I'm just picky about where the points go.
Reviewed by: Charlotte
Final Score: 51 / 100
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