Aesthetics

2: Color Scheme: It's all... pink. The thing I don't understand is why the color scheme is pink, but the pictures seem to feature a shade of blue. It makes no sense. Also, today, sure pure pinkness makes me sick, especially since they're not even good shades of pink. Your saving grace is the fact that they don't clash.

1: Image: Uh, gross. It looks horrible. Erm, I hate it to say the least. It doesn't match the color scheme, they were obviously done in MSpaint, and just... ew. It would look a lot better if the image matched the color scheme or the color scheme was blues. My ultimate words of wisdom would be just to change them.

6: Organization: At least it's well organized. I think that moving the links to the top would make navigation a lot easier. I think it would also be smart to put some more space in between your links and then center them. The MAJOR reason you're losing points here is because of that page transition. I HATE page transitions. They make me want to reach for a hammer and smash my screen. Just take it away. It hurts my eyes. Oh wait, another point off. INVISIBLE SCROLL BARS! Give them a darker highlight color because it's hard to scroll and see where I am and such.

Written Word

7: Grammar: Well, you can't spell very well (ex: realises, diluded, adgitated) and I'm a sucker for spelling. Other than that, you're okay with grammar.

19: My Opinion: Started here. I'm an idiot. As I'm reading along I see "£50", and for some reason, I assume you're American and am stupidly wondering why you're using pounds. Ignore my stupidity.

I am so sick of seeing these.

Uh, I'm not exactly sure who you're talking about in this entry, but you're only 17. You should not have to deal with that. Like I said, I don't know who it is, but I hate drunkards. It's just so irresponsible and self absorbed. It's like they have no self respect or respect for anyone else.

What the hell happened to this page? It really needs to be fixed, it's fucked up.

Aw, this seriously almost made me cry. It's absolutely beautiful.

Happy Birthday, too!

Well, I've read through 20 entries and I feel like I've read just about nothing. It all just seemed so short and unfinished. You're not totally boring, but you don't really interest me either.

8: Writing Style: You can be a good writer when you want, and that shows potential. However, your writing style seems to always change. It's not bad, definitely not bad. Your writing about your dad is beautiful, but the rest lacks something to be desired.

Other

5: Contact: I can reach you easily.

2: Username: Well, I hate it. I have usernames with baby, honey, sexy, sweetie, cutie, and the like in them. But hey, French is hot, right?

1: Title: What the hell does that have to do with anything? Shouldn't the title somehow relate to the design or the site? It doesn't. Bye bye 4 points. *HINT* "of" and "the" shouldn't be capitolized in titles unless they are the first word.

5: Link: Easily found. Gold star! (I'm giving out a lot of those lately.)

Comments: Best wishes being 18 and I'm hoping your dad gets better (I don't pray).

Favorite Quote: We can't cure Cancer, but we can give a 90 year old an erection. We put our minds to great use. (from the profile)

Reviewed by: Charlotte

Final Score: 55 / 100


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